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Thesis statement    Even though oppornents argue that students shouldn't use mobile technology in the class room, it should be allowed because it is helpful tool for students; students can organize contents of classes easily; and classes without mobile technology is difficult. Topic sentence 1    The first reason that students should use mobile technology is that it is helpful tool for students. Topic sentence 2    Secondly, because students can organize classes contents easily, students should use mobile technology in the class. Topic sentence 3    Finally, because classes which that are mobile technology in the class are difficult to do classes. Counter-Argument  Oppornent argue that even though using mobile technology is useful for student. This is true. Students are addieted to mobile technology during the class, but it is ruin morals of students.

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   All of sports organization should ban athlets from using PEDs even though PEDs have a supporting effect on athletes. When athletes use PEDs before a competation all that time, it has influence on athlete's body especially, visceras. As Goodman (2012) explains, "As I have listened to fighters discussing their performance-enhancing drug use, a long with their kidney, liver, bone and brain." ( para4). It shows PEDs have a harmful effect on athletes. However, PEDs helps athletes motivation. According to the author Savulescu, "It's hard to enjoy any sports nerrative, if we don't know who is clean and who isn't."( 2012, para 2). It may be true and PEDs's purpose is help athletes, so Savulesvu's opinion is resonable. Indeed, PEDs  has a burden on visceras; nevertheless, PEDs helps athele's motivation and their power. Refrences Goodman, M. (August 8, 2012). Clean Competation Is Safest. Room Debate: New York Times Online. Savulescu, J. (A...

lower economic standerd

   A defect of lower economic and country might be a peculiar characteristic which is other countries don't have it. When I heard lower economic, I assumed somothing poor such as undeveloping countries and bad environment.However, when I guessed lower economic, positive imagination came up with those negative imaginations. For example, in developing country, economics and an environment are great, but what about people? In Tokyo, no one have an atomospher of warmth and kindness. In contrast, everyone have an atomospher which is east to ask something or talk something in undeveloping country. That is a characteristic of undeveloping area and country. In conclusion, when people felt something negatively, they have to find out good thing of lower economic.
Thesis statement   In fact, Japanese and Taiwanese culture are changing with people, and old style and old culture are dissapearing gradually such as concent of space, family structure, and dinning etiquett. Topic Sentence 1 In the past, Japanese and Taiwanese were keeping to protect own private space when people have a communicate with other people even between same-sex-friend, and they have a good friendships. Topic Sentence 2 However, some of family structure is still inheriting old style in Japan and Taiwan. Topic Sentence 3 In contrast, a few of Taiwanese traditional polite eating habit and manner are rude in Japan.

Environment Refugees

   The gorverment should help foreign refugees more. Grobal warmimg is becoming big grobal issue in the whole world, and it has huge effect on people especially people who are living small island and extremely hot area. As Handwerk (2004) explains, "The average global sea level has risien by 4 to 8 inches (10 to 20 cm) over the past centry" (para.6). This shows some of people are losing living place by melting ice. Moreover, experts on migration says " ten of millions more people in the developing world could be on the move because of disaster." (Kakissis, 2010, para.2). It shows many people have to move and to migrate to other country. However, Rabab Fatima who is the South Asia repesentative of the International Organization presented "Environment refugees have lost everything." and "They don't have the money to make a big move." (Kakissis). This shows refugees don't have a money, but they have to move another area. Therefore, they need...
   Recently, people who are living in developing country have been a huge influence on innovation of advanced country. First, dirty water could be clean water by technology of advanced countries. The water is necessary to live, so this solution can be the most biggest benefit to people who live in developing countries. Second, according to the article, Innovations for the Developing World  the author writes that the power generator helped two villages also it had influence on people who are living big contientals such as Southeast Asia, the Middle of East and africa; as a result, those people could have own free time. Next, in the article, innovations for the developing world, Iqbal Quadir says that people have to distribute the technology for developing countries. It will increace people who are start new buisness. In conclusion, advanced countries are creating and finding new technology. At the same time, those countries are also helping and changing life style of...

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1,  Coordinating Conjunctions  a, Lately, I'm thinking about my third language between Spanish or Korean because both are usuful for my future. b. When I went to Mexico, I could drink legally, so I thought I wish I could drink in the United State too. 2. Conjunctive Adverbs a. Living with a dog is fun and dogs are adorable; on the other hand, there are  so much responsibility and it takes so much money. b. I adjust to live the U.S. ; however, I couldn't adjust only a food. 3. Subordinating Conjunctions a. While I was in 300 level, homework was easy; however, 500 level was totally different. b. If I were my younger brother, I could speak English more because he is 10 years old, but he is learning present progressive now.