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   All of sports organization should ban athlets from using PEDs even though PEDs have a supporting effect on athletes. When athletes use PEDs before a competation all that time, it has influence on athlete's body especially, visceras. As Goodman (2012) explains, "As I have listened to fighters discussing their performance-enhancing drug use, a long with their kidney, liver, bone and brain." ( para4). It shows PEDs have a harmful effect on athletes. However, PEDs helps athletes motivation. According to the author Savulescu, "It's hard to enjoy any sports nerrative, if we don't know who is clean and who isn't."( 2012, para 2). It may be true and PEDs's purpose is help athletes, so Savulesvu's opinion is resonable. Indeed, PEDs  has a burden on visceras; nevertheless, PEDs helps athele's motivation and their power.

Refrences

Goodman, M. (August 8, 2012). Clean Competation Is Safest. Room Debate: New York Times Online.

Savulescu, J. (August 7, 2012). Permit doping so we can monitor it. Room Debate New York Times Online.

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