Thesis statement
 
In fact, Japanese and Taiwanese culture are changing with people, and old style and old culture are dissapearing gradually such as concent of space, family structure, and dinning etiquett.


Topic Sentence 1

In the past, Japanese and Taiwanese were keeping to protect own private space when people have a communicate with other people even between same-sex-friend, and they have a good friendships.

Topic Sentence 2

However, some of family structure is still inheriting old style in Japan and Taiwan.

Topic Sentence 3

In contrast, a few of Taiwanese traditional polite eating habit and manner are rude in Japan.

Comments

  1. Language TrainerAugust 4, 2017 at 5:29 AM

    Good start here but don't include extra information in the topic sentences. You don't want too much detail. Include only the four elements that we studied in class. 85

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